Sunday, April 02, 2006

love shows...

couldn't help it.for a change,no mosquitoes... plus,a cool breeze..er.....got a lil romantic :)



their eyes do not miss
twin sparkles in mine
as i relive, those divine
moments-my first kiss!
sharp ears do not lie
revealed are all musings
my memories of sweet nothings
easily,when i sigh.
never fail to spot,do they?
that happy glow on my face
when i get back from your place
though,not one word i say
now,they press me again
and again,with new questions
teasing me,offering suggestions
coaxing me ,to explain
each,nods, in satisfaction
'she's in love alright,we know,
only tries hard not to show'
i find myself,admitting the emotion
how to hide,it just grows
a secret,no longer mine
i guessed that it would be fine
and gave in,for love shows.
Deepti Bhat 2006

23 Comments:

Blogger peevsie said...

oho yenamma yar jothe lovvvu agbithide????
isthu dodda love letter yen terrorist ge bardya athva deepu darlingiga atva lunar hill tale goskara naa

Sunday, 02 April, 2006  
Blogger Shashi Iyer said...

:)... nice one. but i wonder why u call em shows.

Tuesday, 04 April, 2006  
Blogger xtremely_insane said...

love shows...as in,the love i feel is revealed to all...
there's a different meaning here-its the verb not noun.

Tuesday, 04 April, 2006  
Blogger Sudarshan said...

Superb poem...Great work dips..whats you been upto?? What was your result?? I bet you've done well..you're brainy after all:-)

Tuesday, 04 April, 2006  
Blogger xtremely_insane said...

@suda,
dont ask.brainy ppl screw up :D

@phoenix,ur welcome to ur opinion!

Wednesday, 05 April, 2006  
Blogger Shashi Iyer said...

oh! sorry!

Wednesday, 05 April, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice one... :)

Tuesday, 11 April, 2006  
Blogger Sudarshan said...

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Monday, 17 April, 2006  
Blogger exasparater said...

nice....

Thursday, 20 April, 2006  
Blogger Sudarshan said...

Hey dips..time for a new post:-)

Tuesday, 25 April, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

yea exactly, time for a new post...

Friday, 28 April, 2006  
Blogger Ajay said...

nice one.. lol

Saturday, 06 May, 2006  
Blogger Main... said...

wuhuuuu babes u r in love ....hmmmm everything feels gr8,but just a suggestion, love the one who never makes u cry coz for 1 who makes u cry is not worth ur tears..enjoyyyyy

Sunday, 07 May, 2006  
Blogger the Monk said...

hey, long time...exams?

Tuesday, 09 May, 2006  
Blogger Abhishek said...

well written

Tuesday, 09 May, 2006  
Blogger Sudarshan said...

Dips u ever gona update ur poor blog? lol

Tuesday, 09 May, 2006  
Blogger milo said...

hav cm after long...bt dat ws wow!!nice expression

Monday, 15 May, 2006  
Blogger xtremely_insane said...

gee thanks milo :)

Tuesday, 01 August, 2006  
Blogger xtremely_insane said...

virus, thanks for dropping by!
exasparater..thnx.

sudarshan ,virus yeah sure look out for the new one.

ajay thnx!

main i'm still single :p in love with love!

monk,i'm back!!

abhishek,thnx!

sudarshan, i'm back boy!

Tuesday, 01 August, 2006  
Blogger retarded said...

nicely vented emotions.
i think for rhyming, dont concede ur poetic excellence. no need to rhyme the last words...
poems are beautiful otherwise.

Sunday, 13 August, 2006  
Blogger chandrakumar said...

hehehheh

Thursday, 21 September, 2006  
Blogger Santhosh said...

wow!!!!!!!!!! its really nice.... r u in love??? "illa andre hege baritira istu chennagi". if yes its really great

Saturday, 12 January, 2008  
Blogger xtremely_insane said...

@santhosh,
i am in love with the concept of love :)

Thursday, 07 February, 2008  

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