love shows...
couldn't help it.for a change,no mosquitoes... plus,a cool breeze..er.....got a lil romantic :)
their eyes do not miss
twin sparkles in mine
as i relive, those divine
moments-my first kiss!
sharp ears do not lie
revealed are all musings
my memories of sweet nothings
easily,when i sigh.
never fail to spot,do they?
that happy glow on my face
when i get back from your place
though,not one word i say
now,they press me again
and again,with new questions
teasing me,offering suggestions
coaxing me ,to explain
each,nods, in satisfaction
'she's in love alright,we know,
only tries hard not to show'
i find myself,admitting the emotion
how to hide,it just grows
a secret,no longer mine
i guessed that it would be fine
and gave in,for love shows.
Deepti Bhat 2006
23 Comments:
oho yenamma yar jothe lovvvu agbithide????
isthu dodda love letter yen terrorist ge bardya athva deepu darlingiga atva lunar hill tale goskara naa
:)... nice one. but i wonder why u call em shows.
love shows...as in,the love i feel is revealed to all...
there's a different meaning here-its the verb not noun.
Superb poem...Great work dips..whats you been upto?? What was your result?? I bet you've done well..you're brainy after all:-)
@suda,
dont ask.brainy ppl screw up :D
@phoenix,ur welcome to ur opinion!
oh! sorry!
nice one... :)
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nice....
Hey dips..time for a new post:-)
yea exactly, time for a new post...
nice one.. lol
wuhuuuu babes u r in love ....hmmmm everything feels gr8,but just a suggestion, love the one who never makes u cry coz for 1 who makes u cry is not worth ur tears..enjoyyyyy
hey, long time...exams?
well written
Dips u ever gona update ur poor blog? lol
hav cm after long...bt dat ws wow!!nice expression
gee thanks milo :)
virus, thanks for dropping by!
exasparater..thnx.
sudarshan ,virus yeah sure look out for the new one.
ajay thnx!
main i'm still single :p in love with love!
monk,i'm back!!
abhishek,thnx!
sudarshan, i'm back boy!
nicely vented emotions.
i think for rhyming, dont concede ur poetic excellence. no need to rhyme the last words...
poems are beautiful otherwise.
hehehheh
wow!!!!!!!!!! its really nice.... r u in love??? "illa andre hege baritira istu chennagi". if yes its really great
@santhosh,
i am in love with the concept of love :)
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